Set, Series, Sequence Storyboard

This is my storyboard for the set, series, sequence brief. I based the story on the drawings of the octopuses i did which were mostly dark around the octopus so i thought i would have a story about how the octopus is all alone at the sea bed in darkness and a light comes to him but its only an angry fish passing through. i have tried to use interesting camera angles and framing, for example i have a few close up shots to focus on the octopuses expression. I also think i have done well to describe the story using the drawings because even without looking at the text underneath the drawings it is clear to the viewer what is happening in the story.